• 看小说,练肺活量 - [动漫闲扯]

    2009-07-30


    Deliverance
    作者:Ayngel
    地址:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5141232/1/Deliverance

    这文……简直了

    不说故事,不说剧情,不说文笔,不说细节,不说大局,我什么都不说

    只说一点…………

    肺活量不好的千万别去读这篇玩意儿

    且看我随便摘录的一句话

    注意!是一句话!

    And it was all because of Thrust and Dirge, and the Aerialbots, and Fireflight especially, and Swindle; and although I didn’t end up friends with any of them later on, and, in fact, all of them caused me grief in their own ways in later times, many vorns later, as I thought of the Aerialbots on their miserable shuttle run when they were capable of so much more, and Thrust getting beaten to a pulp by Starscream and TC, and Swindle getting dragged screaming away to that mind prison of Megatron’s I did reflect that I should perhaps have been just a little sympathetic and a little bit grateful to them – for what happened in Tunden, if nothing else.

    这个人和句号有仇么?!!!!

    还是得了终结恐惧症,不到生死攸关绝不肯落下一个小小的终结符号?

    里面经常就可以看到那种结构复杂的句子,从句跟着从句

    基本上我得一句话看它三遍左右,才能勉强搞懂他在说啥

    自从《救赎》之后我就没看过这么累的同人

    况且《救赎》他也分的,不同角色之间用词感觉是不同的,纠结的小红,执着的天火,明快的爵士,多思的TC,残暴的威叔,看字里行间也能分出到底是谁的章节

    可这篇是谁?

    闹翻天!

    md,你能想像闹翻天用这么复杂的从句绕七扭八拐十九弯的语言来跟别人说话么?

    在那之前他自己的CPU就先烧掉了吧?

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